Comments : Just some random thoughts..sorry not really a poem

  • 16 years ago

    by Fay

    Hey i think this is soo sad, cheer up! we all go through this phase, trust me i can relate, this is jst ur mind playing on u , oneday u wil come to realise that are people or someone who cares about u, u dnt need the whole world while its all fake n pretend right? u need real people to care right? read my poems im sure u can relate, goodluck... hang in there.

    Luv Fay :).

  • 16 years ago

    by Kevin

    Really good 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by joseph

    I can understand what your going through and im glad that writing about it helps you. you cant leave stuff like that inside you and have to find a release....so keep writing 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by shamvi

    U don't call this a poem?...whoa...k...then, i like the way u put together ur thoughts...its sad ...nice 1