I really like the continuity of this poem through the four seasons. Shows that you care for the person for the long haul. Like how each verse connects with the topic and reinforces the whole poem.

This poem was so sweet, it brought a tear to my eye. It has a good flow and lovely imagery. Keep it up!

Take care,

5/5 Ingrid

This poem is so sweet..i love it keep it up

Wonder why you want comments since you seem to have plenty already, but I really like your poetry though.. (:

Great flow,
emotional,
and very good topic.
excellent work my friend =)

Wow amazing flow and great writing skills
keep it up and take care:)
-Lisa
p.s take a look at my work wen u can,as well:)

Omg that was butiful

Very great write with full of emotion. 5/5

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