This piece is wonderful it is so emotional and down to earth i like that you are aware of the mistakes you make and that you want tpo fix them... thanks for you comment keep writing xxxx

I love this. I can relate to the begining of the poem and it is so true. great job.

Lik eit! Very strong piece. Very full of emotion and powerful . Keep up the good work!

Ohh ur poem is soo awesume. keep up the gud work.

Good poem, but I saw a little mistake in it. Lovely poem though. 5/5

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OO interesting. I think we all should look abck and compare what we thought our future would be and if we've met that standard yet... and what we would ahve thought if we saw ourselves now back then.
Hmm... jsut makes me think ^^