This is so sad :( It's really good too!! Great write and thank you for the comment!!!

Leslie

That is the best poem i have read in a long time. I can truely say i can realate. So thank you for your truth.

Very deep, with powerful words.
"Not even a mother knows how her child grows, stronger each day. Death by fortune of a mother's delight, doth her greed cray."
Keep it up.

-Lizzi-
5/5

Wow...amazing poem....very powerful wording and its sooo sad,,,,,ggood job on this!

This is a pretty good poem, but the flow was very good. 5/5

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