Wow, wow, wow... This piece is completely mind- blowing. I like everything about it, it is so powerful and greatly written from the beginning to the end.
Your choice of words is excellent, the flow of the whole piece is absolutely flawless.
You did great job with rhymes, too.
Superb piece of poetry, filled with excellently expressed emotions.
My favorite stanza is:

-Illusive lies spilling from your lips
As your eyes gleam with malicious spite
Tried to understand you countless times
Now I'm finally giving up the fight-

Keep up!
5/5 from me