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  • 16 years ago

    by JustKristina

    Aww.. good poem.. very heartfelt and shows true emotion. Things will get better for you.. great work... i loved it! :o]

  • 16 years ago

    by Nicole

    5/5 beautiful work again. so full of emotion, speaks straight to the heart. well done. its excellent

  • 16 years ago

    by Meme

    "maybe if I disappear;
    your happiness will reappear"
    I loved these 2 lines, and i know how it feels when thay say " i dont love you anymore"
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by ShiaSuperman

    Gosh..That must of been hard...