Comments : Snakes

  • 16 years ago

    by The Queen of Spades

    I am intrigued by this poem but not as captivated by it as I am of others that you've written. I think the section you put it under might be a stretch. It begins like you're discussing a companion but then it becomes darker, and more like an introverted poem. Either way, good language once again and haunting piece.

  • 16 years ago

    by Not

    I love the ending of your poem.its kind of scary in a way but i like.!!!=)