This is quite powerful, I really like it. Whole poem is filled with collided emotions which leaved strong impression on me.
Effective, from the beginning to the end.
Great job!

This was a really good vent. Great job!

I do like this. But don't let it be your lastttt. I know how you feel about the not being able to write. Lol. I'm like that too at the moment.
Anyways, i loved this. 5/5.

` Liz =]]
Ily!

I do like this. But don't let it be your lastttt. I know how you feel about the not being able to write. Lol. I'm like that too at the moment.
Anyways, i loved this. 5/5.

` Liz =]]
Ily!