Comments : Life suckes

  • 16 years ago

    by I Seem to be the Heartless

    Fantastic poem! Love the flow of this. Once again, just watch your tenses:
    "There is a few ways out"
    Should be "There are a few ways out"
    And your title of your poem: Life Suckes should be Life Sucks.

    Keep up the awesome progress!!!!

    Josie