Awesome. simplay awesome. 5/5

Hey britt, you were right, it didnt. i changed it =] thanks for your advice
xoxox

The last stanza of this blew my mind.
It is amazing how people keep to their dreams, to hide from the pains reality brings.
tehe, what do ya know, that rhymed.
rhyming or not, its true.
amazing and beautiful
your choice of words to rhyme were stunning, especially how everything flowed together into one complet story.

5/5

This poem had amazing flow and the words were absolutely breathtaking! great job this is a 10/5 for sure :DDD cant wait to read some more of your poems.