Comments : Another Lonely Night

  • 16 years ago

    by Crystal Gaze

    Deeply Sad,
    You penned this clear and with deep emotions. A very relatible peice, often tears stain my pillow when i don't have Jakes chest to cry into. However I hope this wasn't based on life...
    An excellent write Kayla, the flow wa s good, and the word choice appropriate.

    --Elly.

  • 16 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    Wow indeed I can relate I loved this poem almost forgot why I loved reading all your poetry 5/5