"Watch you show that smile for me"
-- [speechless]

this poem is real good. :)
your a sweet guy for a 13 year old,
and you can write poems too.!
impressiveeee.

-- paula <33

I definately know all about that smile your peom talks about, the one that makes you melt and drops you to your knees. Love is truly amazing 5/5 GG23

Awww
it's cute and enjoyable
I know how you felt
throughout the whole poem
for only being 13
you have talent
5/5
kaila