Hey,
I love it, it is so real, and I can relate to it, and I have the idea that many others can relate to it too. the flow of your poem is good as well as the rhyming, my favorite stanza is the thirth stanza =D keeep up the good work 5.5
kisses stephanie

This is really a great poem and the whole poem hangs together very well. I just love this one. It has the poetic flow and the consecutive rhymes are superb :)

tc
Fsams

This is a wonderful poem

Huh... Good work...

Where there's no care, we wear and tear. Within burden relieved, Love speaks. Love is demonstrated kindness. We all need someone to lean on. There's always one out there, who cares. Though it takes some time, true Love lasts.