Aww this poem is really sweet and wonderful. i really enjoyed reading it very much, i think you did a wonderful job on it. 5/5

~Kristina

=] ii like dis one,
its kinda how i feel bout my bf.
its nice
xx

It was good, you may want to revise it a little though, there were a few grammatical errors, but overall nice job i liked it. keep writing you have talent.

Awww
thats so sweet

Aww this was so sweet and easy for me to relate with. It just put a smile on my face with its wonderful emotions. I do think you can add a little bit more to it which would add meaning but all in all it was great. Well done *5/5*

REally short but realy sweet.
Just keep taking my advice.
You'll only get better as you
write. 5/5
3/5
<3Tay

Hey,
I think its very sweet, and beautiful. I can relate to it;) and maybe many others too.
I also think that is nice of you to dedicate it to someone. the flow is nice. keep up the good work;)
kisses stephanie

Awww cute poem! ilove it. great job!!!!! 5/5

AWW BABY, HERE'S ANOTHER ONE I HAVEN'T READ. TE LOS VOY A RECLAMAR AL RATO QUE TE DESPIERTES OK!