You don't need that to be a work in progress cause its good!
I like it cause I know how that feels....
Anyways its a wonderful poem beautifully written and I can feel the emotions surounding it

Nadia

5/5!

No this is good<3

Wow that was great! I can tell you put a lot of thought into it or otherwise it came flowing naturally! either way is was very well written! i culd feel the emotions!