Comments : Bittersweet Feast

  • 16 years ago

    by Anonymous Angel

    Hey,
    a beautiful dark poem, I like the subject, I haven't read any poem like yours. the flow is flawless as well as the rhyming. the words you used are very powerful, my favorite lines are:

    Burned like a beautiful liar
    Such a sweet, scalded taste
    The lovely flavor of fire
    Bittersweet, I shall not waste
    ^
    loved it;) 5/5
    kisses stephanie