Comments : He Wasn't

  • 16 years ago

    by ali

    This is soo emotional
    i really relate to this poem, especially the lines:
    'When I looked at my future
    I thought he'd be there
    When I dreamed of tomorrow
    I thought he'd still care' i soo know how this feels, awesome depiction of feelings. the emotion just leaks out of this piece
    great job!!!
    5/5
    -ali x