Comments : The truth beind your lies

  • 16 years ago

    by adrian

    Wow
    this poem really flows together which is a really good thing
    5/5 from me

  • 16 years ago

    by you will never forget me

    This is absolutely perfect. I can really relate to that right now. I love it. <3

  • 16 years ago

    by MiSuNdErStOoD

    Really good i feeel that way sometimes too

  • I understand what you're going through, the whole "been there, done that" thing. it's like because of how he hurt you you can't let anyone in because you're afraid he'll do it again. but you want so much to trust him again.

    tohavesomeoneloveyou

  • 16 years ago

    by Tripp

    I like this :). it's depressing but it speaks for a large majority of the people on this website. we've all been hurt and don't wanna get hurt again.

    good job on this kid, keep it up.

  • 16 years ago

    by ItsYou ItsAlwaysBeenYou

    This i a great poem it speaks volumes on just life and how almost everybody feels at some point or another. keep up the good work! :)

  • 14 years ago

    by SheenaMarie

    Great flow to this write 5/5