Hi thnx for the comment, yhis is a very interesting piece. the a,b,a,b rhyming structure worked very well for the poem. The words used are very powerful in its description

only one thing i noticed that "there coming for you" should be they're but thats just me being picky a guess.

other than that well done.

Gary

5/5

I found it really interesting how you started each stanza. I really liked it.
great work:)

5/5

Ummm..... that was kinda creepy.
but-powerful.
:)
gave it a 5/5

It was a very nice read, simple..but yet..underneath contained a meaningful message of which is compelling!! Good job!