I'm sorry about this I have refrained for so long .. I can't contain it any longer. You make me so embarrassed! I mean that quite litterally.

I'm not quite sure how I can call what I scribble down "Poetry" after I have read your work. When I saw this entry in one of the contests, I finally had to give in and comment on your work.

1 word for me sums it up ..

Flawless!

I'm ashamed that the words in my comment cannot do your work justice.
This poem just flows so effortlessly, never once do you have to think about how the line/structure/rhyming is supposed to sound. Every word is perfectly placed with a surgical precision.
No critique needed on this .. I wouldn't change a single syllable!

As much as it pains me to give such high praise, I feel I must. This type of work is what I aspire to writing.

[6/5] < If I could.

~Pete.

Great job 5/5 =]

This really is a fantastic poem! Such a beautiful flow!!!

Keep it up!!!

Josie