Good poem.It had really good flow.Keep up the good work!

Awwwww how cute!!!
this poem is soo sweet, and really easy to relate to!!!
just aww..! flowed well and the words were cleverly chosen, the ending is really powerful!
great stuff, keep it up!
5/5
-ali x

This was great. And I love how you summed up the ending with "and only in dreams can you say I love you too".