Simon
Wha a beautiful pasionate pece.
Excellent ob!
Take care Cindy

Passionate,and romantic....a little short, but able to convey it's meaning in those few words....all in all very beautiful.... I especially like this couplet:

"Envisage my body neatly buried
Beneath the petals of your seduction."

Take care and welcome back! Debbie

So much passion packed into such few words.
It is difficult to do that in short poems, but you have nailed it. Beautiful!
Kay

Loved it. (-_-)

Beautifully written my friend.

Its alright. It didn't blow my mind but it wasn't a cliched disasterpiece. I like the first stanza, the second let you down a little... And thats my opinion. Passionate..

Such a lovely piece..

"Follow me, release your love,
Join me at love's Elysium."

dazling..

Wow,
this is nicely written great poem that shows great emotions
keep up the great work and a 5/5 from me as you truly deserve it

Wow, you must be a romantic at heart!

A beautiful plea for love, Simon!

A very well done from me,

5/5 Ingrid