Greay poem, loved the way it rhymed

Loved it, short but powerful, absolutley love the rhyming technique used in this piece. It really flows well.

Excellent

5/5

Gary.

Wow, i honestly thought that was amazing, the way you expressed the words in this piece, and the words you used were so descriptive. the flow was amazing, loved how you kept to the one rhyme, beautifully written piece, it had a lot of emotion, and was truly such a great poem. 5/5

nikki

This was so heartbreaking to read, and yet so beautifully written at the same time.

Despite being relatively short, you managed to put in so much depth and emotion, which isn't always easy to do.

I loved the ending, I found it to be very intense and hard hitting.

Beautifully written.