Comments : Suicidal Mistake

  • 16 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    I think we all get this way at times but like you said it's just those stormy days, we all have them but they never last forever. Excellent job and great flow as always 5/5 GG23

  • Hey! Great poem. i can really relate that to how i felt last year.
    love mel

  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    Short yet effective. Lovely piece and flowing well. Poetic and with a good lexis use. Tc

    Fsams