Sammy,
Great poem! The flow was great and it made sense! ^_^ I understand the feelings in this poem, and it truly describes some of my feelings, y'know?
Well, I have nothing to critisize, so keep it up! 5/5 ^_^

With all due respect,
Hatori
IWannaBeANinja

P.S. If you get a chance, could you please read, rate, and comment one of my poems?
Thanks!

That was so amazingly good!

I like it :) 5/5

Wow... that was acually really good