Comments : Brand New Child

  • 16 years ago

    by Hannah Emellia

    Awwww. that'so so sweet, Mo. i really liked it. good job.

  • 16 years ago

    by Dark Secrets

    Congrats... great poem, you described babies exactly as they are, to be honest they are probably the only thing in the world that makes everything right

  • 15 years ago

    by silent turbulence

    Great poem! loved the flow!!