Very visual and very very good.
I love it.

Short and beautiful words explaining a lot, Precise and up to the point. Very creative and impressive altough the poetic quality of rhyming is not visible on the surface. Poetic and lexically strong in its own way

Love it

Wc to P&Q
Fsams

Thanks you guys. (am i allowed to respond??)
oh well, weither way, i'm glad you enjoyed my poems.

It may not save you, but it gives the escapism we all need sometimes!! Fantastic write. Well done. xx