Comments : The days.

  • 17 years ago

    by Joshua Grider

    This has a lot of power wen the right people read it.. :)
    loved it.
    5/5
    plz return the favor

  • 17 years ago

    by ayla

    Thanks :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Bekka Smekka

    I like this poem, but you could have gone further and accomplished something great!
    beautiful writing
    :):)

  • 17 years ago

    by ayla

    Haha Thanx

  • 17 years ago

    by Krystal

    Awe, this is cute. I agree with Nightmare though, you could've done more with it, and you can. I think you can dazzle all of these poets. You should.
    Post another soon?
    -Krystal[:

  • 17 years ago

    by ayla

    Yeeeh Mabey : )