Comments : Only God Can Judge Me

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Kay
    What an excellent piece. What an excellent message this sends.

    Heaven or Hell, my sin's he'll atone
    Only he knows the remorse I've shown
    Alpha and Omega, his decision alone

    How true this last stanza is.
    Great job!
    Love Cindy

  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Kay,
    This is the first poem by you I am reading. I want to get to know my fellow clubmembers!
    About the poem....people are always so eager to judge eachother, mostly based upon inaccurate or incomplete information. Never worry about what others say about you. Keep a close relationship with God and the voice deep within yourself and act upon what those two tell you...you will never be wrong, ok?

    Take care,

    xxIngrid 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Pete

    I really like the last line in this; it states the same as the title - reworded. Very nice job. It seems that all entries into this contest have been dark in nature so far.
    This one has a rather upbeat feel to it though... no matter what you throw at me, you can't break my spirit. Judge me as you may, your judgement doesn't count.

    I really like this poem; it's a very strong contender.

    ~Pete.

  • 16 years ago

    by Fran

    This is a message that unfortunately too few heed. So many people are always ready to pick up and cast that first stone. Good job.

  • 16 years ago

    by FridusBlueheaven

    This is great. I feel the emotion right here. 5/5 from me!!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by debbylyn

    I love this piece....too many times we live our lives worried about what others may think about us....I've learned to let things roll off and go on with it....

    The images and word choices are excellent and the rhyming is good without being cliche...

    "Alpha and Omega, his decision alone "

    ^awesome ending line! Well done! Take care, Debbie

  • 16 years ago

    by keithnwv

    Being judged by others hurts so much. i wish they only knew what was in the heart of the ones they look down on. I try not to care but its hard. Loved your poem

  • 16 years ago

    by Lu

    Let them cast stones upon my skin
    Practice deceit, let their web spin
    Cause only God knows how it will end
    ^^^
    Love this stanza Kay ... so true my friend

    Heaven or Hell, my sin's he'll atone
    Only he knows the remorse I've shown
    Alpha and Omega, his decision alone
    ^^^
    You've blown me away with this last stanza ....
    Only he knows the remorse I've shown
    ^^^
    Others can easily throw stones passing judgment .... yet fail to look in their own back yard.
    Great message with a wonderful choice of words ....
    Great read Kay!