Comments : Sometimes

  • 16 years ago

    by Sara

    BEAUTIFUL POEM! I relate. well done =]

  • 16 years ago

    by Eri

    Its is veryy good but i think the 4th part sayin fear should be left out it would sound better but all in all i like it [x

  • 16 years ago

    by Teria

    Well, I surely love this poem. I wasn't too fond of how you had 3 stanzas, then 4 through-out (minus the last - but I usually count that as an exception). But, it did go just fine with the rest of the poem.

    And, I love how you put it. I've always wanted to write a poem like such, and it's great to read one that is so easy to relate to. because, so many people go through life with in such a way.

    You did a wonderful job with this.
    And, at first I wasn't sure why it was in the sad poems, lol. But, at the end I got it.

  • 11 years ago

    by Girl of Conviction

    This is really good :]
    i liked it
    :]
    great job

    5/5