Comments : Dear mama [Contest]

  • 12 years ago

    by Pete

    Did I really expect anything else other than a really good piece from you?
    Tupac titles and you being let loose on them... No contest!

    Now I know this might seem rather nasty but I can't really place you in any of the positions for the contest - you being a best friend irl and me already r/r/c'ing everything you do; would be pointless to give you a position.
    This poem however is a very strong contender and would almost definitely have placed in the rankings somewhere.

    Great sentiment expressed in this poem, the only thing I can pick fault in is the lack of imagery. The thoughts expressed could have been better represented; but as you know I'm a fussy ****.

    This is yet another good piece of poetry bro.

    ~Pete.

  • 12 years ago

    by Jackie

    I thought your poem was excellent, very sweet. Every boy/man should feel that way about his mother. 5/5