Could feel the emotion, it was written wonderfully. Good piece.

-Blessed.

Very nice poem with sheer grief depicted. Your intention is very clear in this piece. I like the way the story flowed from the beginning to the end. Superb!

Keep writing

I could feel the emotions coming off my computer screen as I read this. It flowed nicely and I thought it was very touching.

Once again I think most people can relate to this in their own way. I see it as a case of where you had the oppertunity to prevent something and you never spoke up and made a difference. Great job and very relatable 5/5 GG23