Wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

This is truely an amazing piece of poetry.

I loved the style, the rythem, the rhyming structure, everything about this piece is awsome. I especially liked the way you broke down the emotions in the way you have, it really describes in detail what you are trying to portray with ease.

An absolutley wicked piece m8y.

100/5

Gaz.

Really well written, very descriptive.

The structure you used was quite unique.

"Naked bodies cling like fresh shooting vine,
Writhing in passion bodies intertwine."
^A truly "hot" line but in a really artsy way. I loved your stanza about lust.

A wonderful poem, I wonder why you specifically picked pride, lust, and jealousy though. 5/5

This is simply breath taking. I love how you have simply broken down each stanza.. the jelousy, lust, and pride.

The flow is amazing in each verse and each emotion screams aloud. I do not understand how something so amazingly written has not been discovered by more poets on this site.

It is as though you have taken a look at different times in my life and quilled those moments so elogantly.

When talking about these emotions one normally leaves a bitter taste in the readers mouth; however, you have done just the opposite and leave me wanting more.

I feel as though I become lost in your words and there is nothing else around expect for the vivid images that you so gracefully implant upon my imagination.

Such a sour topic for most, but the way you penned it has left me uterrly speechless and there are no words that can describe the enjoyment that I recieve from reading your portrait portrayal of poetry.

~~Sher

Wow! An enchanting write... The interpretation in this poem is superbly written and expressed with amazing verity.. I am immersed in the creativity in your writing... The combined words and the way you create such beautiful and vivid imagery is astounding... This poem is so going to my favorites...

5/5! (: