It's so true that often the things we search for are right infront of our eyes, we just never take the time to notice or appreciate them. Excellent job 5/5 GG23

And again the title & poem didnt really click. but i liked it, the flow was better in this poem & the wording was great. but im not sure if i understand it, why is she sorry?

Hmm well this one is pretty great not the other one! i love the style and the imagery u have wrote it here! well i think it written very well so keep it up 5/5

This is a really sad poem. I kind of felt like this before, but that was a while ago. You expressed the feeling very well. Going to my favs. 5/5

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