Aww this is really good, it's so moving and really got me
great stuff, keep it up!!!
5/5
- ali

Hey thanks for the comment!!

What talent you have very good written kind of sad there is only 1 poem write more!!!

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Oh my god

it's really amazing

i loved it

keep it up

You are very talented
keep up the good work
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I really love the first stanza.
"When you see me cry,
they're not tears of pain,
not tears of joy,
just tears in vain.
They're empty drops,
falling down my face."

I don't care for the repetition of "bleed" and "bleeding" and in the 2 5th and 6th stanzas, the rhyme scheme is off but you did a good job portraying your sadness and the title was good. Again I Love the first stanza. Nice job overall.

I love the repetition of bleed and bleeding! it's awesome!