Comments : Faith At The Crossroads [Collab]

  • 16 years ago

    by Teria

    "toward the " << TowardS.

    I really liked the poem so don't take what I have to say the wrong way.

    Okay, your poem is kind of story like. There's the idea of it . . and the idea of it. There's a bit of emotion but it's not emotional enough to be poetic like. If that makes sense. You did a great job, but it's just . . poitn blank. There's no getting around what you're saying. No reason for us to ponder, no reason to wonder, nothing. . .
    It tells it straight.

    Which is good sometimes.
    But, I just don't think it was good with this poem.

    I'm going to give you a 4.5 . . .and it breaks my heart. :|
    Because, you're wonderful at writing.

  • 16 years ago

    by Blissful

    Beautiful. I also have been in a postion where I had to choose a certain road opening it was the one that lead me into my loves arms. You and Italian Stallion did a wonderful job! Well done *5/5*