Leaves me feeling like its unfinished but really good

Nice poem.... very nice I lyk that a lot
Weird we kinda half think the same except for me its playin the flute not swimming ;)

Keep up ur great writing!

Nadia

5/5

I really like this poem i can relate..5/5.

GO PIA GO PIA ITS UR B-DAY

lol i luv dis poem all chix can relate to it
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luke poop
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