Omg. I really really really love this poem.
It sends me goosebumps. It's really good! keep writing. XD

Okay. Oh wow.

I don't even know what I could say that would even begin to sum up how I feel about this piece..

This is frikken amazing.

The emotion in this piece is overwhelming without being overbearing, and the imagery is fantastic. So striking and vivid.

Despite not rhyming, you managed to keep the flow flawless throughout the whole piece, and despite it being a little long, you easily held my interest throughout.

Beautiful.