Comments : I see him

  • 16 years ago

    by Whitney

    Its really good.. i love it. 5/5

  • Very beautiful poem, but it had the grammatical errors, also. "Wounder" is spelled "wonder" and there are a few other words. Good poem though. 4/5

    <mOnStRiTo'S pRiNcEsS>

  • 16 years ago

    by Nigel Oliver

    This was really good, the flow worked really well.

    But your format of each stanza should be fixed.