Well, to start off, you have a missing letter in this sentence :p
"what cold have been"

for this part, i dont quite understand the metaphors behind it... it's kinda confusing. you may need to go back and fix this a bit..
"i wonder Ive showed a good chart
maybe things could have been rearranged"

and i think i have an idea of what you mean here, but im not quite sure...
"i guess it will never show"

let me know if you revise it! it's loved to see the final!

<3ya girly

A name......
"Falling Apart"
-Animus

Yeah it is a bit off and you should work on. There was a couple of grammatical errors. Keep it up.

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