Love it :] keep up the good work

I really like this piece, it flows so effortlessly .. its such a graceful poem.
The two main things I was looking for in this contest was a solid rhyme scheme that was adhered to throughout, and a poem with great flow.
This piece has both of those things in abundance.

On top of that this piece portrays a really good story to it.

A solidly written poem, thoroughly enjoyable to read.

~Pete.