Comments : First Day of School

  • 16 years ago

    by Fan Angeleo

    Hi thanks for commenting on my poems I always check here for your poems. This one " The First Day Of School" , Is very good, I really like this line, "my lonely dreary pity week".

  • 16 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    That was good and I appreciate your comment on my poem. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by FlawlesslyTarnished

    Very nice poem. very nicely written.
    nicely worded too. and well thought out.
    I liked the last stanza. :]
    [especially the first line] 5/5. :]