I love this it' great!
I like the why it just flows on and on.
Great job! 5/5

I love this it' great!
I like the why it just flows on and on.
Great job! 5/5

Great poem
but i think you made a typo on the last line of the first stanza
i think it should be dont not done
but good poem
you wrote it quite well

keenan

5/5 :]

Awwh...
I loved it...
Great Job.. =]]

Wow..

--Lindsey

Good job! 10/10