Aww this poem is cute and juss gets to the point that words are not enough to explain how ur heart and body feels when ur around that special someone...

Eh. Its deffinately a good start. There is an onvious emotion in this poem, any reader can feel it. However the structure is deffinately lacking. There like is no flow or rhyme&reason for any placement. Like with some minor adjusments it could be amazing
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[PygmyPuff]