Well i thinks its impressive, i loved how you were still able to make every line make sense and rhyme. great job, an interesting style also, i like it

Wow, this poem was absolutely amazing. You chose to write about the two most important things in a person's life. Great poem. 5/5

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Wow, i loved this. It was so powerful and i loved the form as well. The flow was good, the words you chose were perfect and the descriptions were very well thought through. I just really liked it, nice job. 5/5

I've never seen this style or I never realized it before. I think you did a great job in keeping with the style and still conveying the message.

I agree with the others - your title was great. Many times I read a poem based on the title, I'm curious to read more.

This is very good Lento is extremely hard to do for most people keep it up 5/5

That was really neat. I've never read a Lento before. I loved the subject matter and words you used. Nice job 5/5