Deb
You did such a wonderful job on this poetry form. How sad it brought me to tears. This is how my room feels since I lost my love. The life in the house is gone :(
Excellent !
Love Cindy

Rooms with memories that burn...
emptiness as paper torn....a room once occupied now left forlorn....this room now empty of love, just crystal tears of sadness
to refllect to mourn

An excellent thought provoking poem, very well worded. 5/5

I like the ending it flows well
otherwise it needs more explaining why its the way it is