Wow excellent flow and rhyme, great themem and story. 5/5 love it, absolutely. it is kinda disturbing though, to say the least. but so are a lot of poems on this site hahaha. anyway, great poem.

and i'm glad you could identify with the theme of my poem "Tech Support". Not many people really know what it's like on the other end of the phone haha.

That was deep. I really enjoyed reading this. It was really dark but I couldn't stop reading it. Very good job here.

5/5

Okay. I frigging loved this.

I found this to be both original and unique in concept, and it kept me interested throughout the entire piece.

Flow was perfect throughout and the imagery you portrayed was beautifully done, it created such vivid pictures that it was like I could -see- everything that was happening.

This is beautifully written.

WHoA, this was awsome. I love your choice of words because they really fit the mood.
(is it about vampires or just a monster?)

This poem is amazing
I love the rhyme scheme and it flows perfectly
the word choice fits very well.
I love how you write your dark poetry
this one is going on my faves list.
5/5