Ok...how is mine better?

Cause it is have u not read it? =p

I have...many times...its not that good

Kay then how is mine better?

Yours is more of a poem than a ramble of words like mine

Private messages form now on =P

Ok

I dont know wat to say

Is that a good or bad thing? :O

Wow i really love this its the type of rhyming i love and you say your 14 hahaha nice keep it up awsome!!!!

Lol thnx