Your lines are really wonderful...Sweet simple and humble......

Really nice upbeat love poem, I particularly enjoy the imagery you used in this piece. You really let the reader see what you were thinking when you wrote this.

I would have liked to see a more set rhyme scheme, but it does work nicely without one.

Overall a pretty well written poem, very good for the first one you have put on this site.

I look forward to reading more of your work.

~Pete.

"Never stop smiling, you never know who is going to fall in love with your smile."

Gabriel Garcia Marquez

wonderful quote

It's a nice poem

like it much

good luck