Very heart felt poem, loved the repitition, nice structure, keep up the good work

Its great,, nice piece and good expression ur feelings as well. 5/5

This is really amazing write by u.
Great!!!
Keep up the good work.

God bless u

Hassan
How sad this is. To love someone who does not return the love hurts more. I can feel the pain in your heart from your words.
Great job!
Your friend Cindy

This poem is very sad... I feel so sorry for anyone who has to go throw this...

Waiting for someone who will never come again.. Is like surviving alive from an accident everyone else died...it is so horrible..